Appendix J
Quadratus quotes Richard III and immediately announces what he is doing. In Act 2, scene 1 of John Marston’s What You Will, he cries:
A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse!
The line is Richard’s cry in Richard III, Act 5, scene 4. Quadratus follows it by calling attention to his habit of speaking “play scraps.” His quarrel with Lampatho is conducted partly through the language of the theatre.1
Marston’s play belongs to about 1600–1601 and appeared in print in 1607. Its title is also the subtitle of Shakespeare’s Twelfth Night. The 1607 book was printed by George Eld for Thomas Thorpe—the same printer and publisher responsible for Shakespeare’s Sonnets in 1609.2
Quadratus supplies further Shakespearean echoes. At the opening of Act 5, scene 1, he says:
Feed and be fat, my fair Calipolis.
Pistol uses the same formulation in 2 Henry IV, Act 2, scene 4. The joke already has a theatrical history: Pistol combines phrases from George Peele’s The Battle of Alcazar. Marston’s use belongs to that chain of quotation and parody.3
“Rivo” is also part of Quadratus’s recognisable manner. Immediately after the Richard III quotation in What You Will, Act 2, scene 1, he cries “Rivo, Saint Mark,” and later in the same scene gives a drinking rhyme:
Music, tobacco, sack and sleep,
The tide of sorrow backward keep.
If thou art sad at others’ fate,
Rivo, drink deep, give care the mate.
At the dinner in Act 5, scene 1, his next line after “Feed and be fat” is “Rivo, here’s good juice, fresh borage, boy?” But the fourth occurrence belongs to another character’s imitation of him. In Act 4, scene 1, Meletza describes:
my chub, my Epicure Quadratus, that rubs his guts, claps his paunch and cries Rivo, entertaining my ears perpetually with a most strong discourse of the praise of bottle ale and red herrings.
The distinction matters: Quadratus says “Rivo” three times, and Meletza makes it his catchphrase in her caricature. Marston shows both the performance and how another person hears and mimics it.4
Shakespeare also puts the cry inside an impersonation. In 1 Henry IV, Act 2, scene 4, Prince Hal imagines himself and Falstaff playing Hotspur and Hotspur’s wife:
[…] I prithee, call in Falstaff. I’ll play Percy,
and that damned brawn shall play Dame Mortimer
his wife. “Rivo!” says the drunkard. Call in
Ribs, call in Tallow.
Here too “Rivo” accompanies a bodily caricature and a performed voice. Together with the Calipolis quotation, sack, paunch and appetite, it gives Quadratus a recognisable connection with the comic world of the Henry IV plays.4
Later in What You Will, Act 5, scene 1, Quadratus addresses the Duke of Venice:
I am fat and therefore faithful. I will do that which few of thy subjects do: love thee. But I will never do that which all thy subjects do: flatter thee.
More fully, he promises to do what few subjects do—love the duke—and refuses to do what all his subjects do—flatter him. He then proposes an entertainment on Cato of Utica and volunteers to play Cato himself. The duke objects that he lacks a beard; Quadratus answers that a beard never made Cato. Here is a theatrical figure who combines appetite, hostility to flattery and an ambition to perform a classical statesman.1
Neville’s bodily build gives this characterization a biographical point of comparison. Quadratus calls himself “fat”; John More, writing to Winwood on 29 October 1611 about Neville’s prospects of office, refers to “his unwieldy body and giving himself to a mere country life.” Mayerne’s medical account, headed “Sir Henry Nevill. May 14. 1615,” begins with “Obesus”—corpulent. The letter assigning Neville the name Similis because he was “like Hen 8,” quoted in Appendix B, supplies another contemporary comparison of his appearance. These descriptions belong beside Quadratus’s own “I am fat” and Meletza’s caricature of his guts and paunch.5
The vocabulary study places this cluster among 197 plays written in 1590–1610. “Rivo” occurs in five plays (2.5 per cent), including What You Will and 1 Henry IV. Each of the seven words highlighted in Ken Feinstein’s cited blog discussion occurs in nine or fewer plays in this period; all seven also appear, in the corresponding word forms or inflections, in Shakespeare:
| Word or word family | Plays containing it, out of 197 |
|---|---|
| Calipolis | 4 |
| Rivo | 5 |
| yelp | 2 |
| incomprehensible / incomprehensibly | 8 |
| snaffle | 6 |
| unwind | 9 |
| vassalage | 9 |
These are counts of distinct plays, not repetitions of a word. The four “Rivo” occurrences in Marston therefore contribute one play to the total of five. The small distributions make the cluster more particular than a collection of common verbal resemblances.6
The exchange need not run in one direction. Shakespeare could also play off Marston. What You Will and Twelfth Night belong to an overlapping theatrical moment, and the order of their composition is disputed. Some Shakespeare examples in this word group are earlier than Marston’s play; snaffle occurs in the later Antony and Cleopatra, while vassalage occurs in the approximately contemporary or later Troilus and Cressida. The figures describe shared vocabulary within that exchange; the direction has to be considered passage by passage.6
Quadratus clearly quotes Shakespeare and uses Shakespearean language, but whether he is intended as a caricature of Shakespeare or Neville remains unresolved.7
Marston’s Pigmalion’s Image and Venus and Adonis
Before What You Will, Marston had published The Metamorphosis of Pigmalions Image. And Certaine Satyres (1598). Its opening poem retells the story of the sculptor who falls in love with his own ivory image, which Venus brings to life. Its relationship to Venus and Adonis has long been recognised in scholarship: A. H. Bullen identifies Shakespeare’s poem as an inspiration and notes their shared stanza form. The verbal echo is particularly clear in the verses headed “The Author in praise of his precedent Poem.”
In Venus and Adonis, lines 199–200, Venus asks:
“Art thou obdurate, flinty, hard as steel?
Nay, more than flint, for stone at rain relenteth.
Marston writes:
So Labeo did complain his love was stone,
Obdurate, flinty, so relentless none.
The echo joins the repeated “obdurate, flinty” to the same image of a beloved whose stony hardness resists entreaty.8
The accompanying satires offer a further possible Shakespearean echo. In the second satire accompanying The Metamorphosis of Pigmalions Image (1598), an apparently devout man is exposed as a “vile, sober, damn’d, Polititian.” Hotspur calls Bolingbroke a “vile politician” in 1 Henry IV, 1.3. Searches of EEBO/EarlyPrint, allowing spelling variants and intervening words, retrieved no other independent example of this particular combination before 1650: the additional Shakespeare hit repeats the passage in the First Folio. Both works appeared in print in 1598. Neville’s parliamentary and diplomatic career gives “politician” an obvious biographical relevance, while “vile” invites a possible play on Neville and the family motto Ne vile velis. A Catholic newsletter of 16 August 1612 also calls him “a greate Puritane,” while discussing his prospects of becoming secretary. That supplies another biographical point of contact with Marston’s Puritan politician, though the satire’s accusation of usury does not by itself identify Neville.8
The same satire opens with the speaker calling himself a “dull-sprighted fat Boetian Boore.” Beside Neville’s documented corpulence, Fitzgeoffrey’s description of him as Aonian in Affaniae (1601), III.41, is suggestive: Aonian is a poetic designation associated with Boeotia, and Sutton translates the phrase as “Boeotian Neville’s person.” These correspondences belong beside Quadratus’s appetite and Shakespearean language. They remain possible allusions: the Boeotian speaker and the later politician are distinct figures within the satire, and Fitzgeoffrey’s learned compliment has a different tone from Marston’s self-mocking “boor.”9
Notes and sources
John Marston, What You Will (London: George Eld for Thomas Thorpe, 1607), STC 17487, TCP A07081, Acts 2.1 and 5.1; Folger Early Modern English Drama record; public TCP transcription. Shakespeare, Richard III 5.4. Quotations from Marston modernize spelling; punctuation has been adjusted for readability.↩︎
Janet Clare, “What You Will”, The Complete Works of John Marston, University of Leeds, on the approximate composition period and publication in 1607. The Folger record gives the imprint. Shakespeare, Shake-speares Sonnets (London: George Eld for Thomas Thorpe, 1609), title page.↩︎
Marston, What You Will 5.1; Shakespeare, 2 Henry IV 2.4. George Peele, The Battle of Alcazar, the Calipolis feeding episode, provides the earlier phrases. See the annotated text, with Dyce’s comparison of the lines and Pistol’s combination of them. This is not an independently invented phrase unique to Shakespeare.↩︎
John Marston, What You Will (London: George Eld for Thomas Thorpe, 1607), 2.1, 4.1 and 5.1; STC 17487, TCP A07081, public transcription; Folger edition record. Spelling modernized. Three occurrences of “Riuo” are in Quadratus’s speeches; the fourth is Meletza’s representation of him. Shakespeare, 1 Henry IV, 2.4, Prince Hal’s speech. The Folger lineation is retained; the opening ellipsis marks omission within a line. Within the 1590–1610 comparison, the other three plays containing “Rivo” are Blurt, Master Constable (1601), Law Tricks (1604) and The Alchemist (1610), using the corpus’s composition dates.↩︎
John More to Ralph Winwood, 29 October 1611, Report on the Manuscripts of the Duke of Buccleuch and Queensberry, Preserved at Montagu House, Whitehall, I (London, 1899), pp. 101–102, quotation on p. 102; also Jackie Watson, Epistolary Courtiership and Dramatic Letters (2024), Letter 17, p. 80. More’s own words are quoted in the printed edition. ‘Unwieldy’ supplies a bodily comparison without giving Neville’s weight or establishing his appearance in 1600–1601. Théodore de Mayerne, Opera medica, ed. Joseph Browne (London, 1701), pp. 198–203, especially p. 198, printed case, headed ‘Sir Henry Nevill. May 14. 1615.’ This is the ambassador’s case. ‘Obesus’ means corpulent; the case is a posthumously printed medical account. For Similis, see Watson, Letter 41, pp. 133–134 and n. 104, transcribing British Library Harley MS 7002, fol. 281, discussed in Appendix B. These descriptions postdate the play’s likely composition, so neither fixes his bodily appearance in 1600–1601. The Sonnet 66 chapter discusses More’s description alongside the other physical evidence.↩︎
Author’s count of the seven terms identified in Ken Feinstein, “Marston’s ‘What You Will’ and Shakespeare” (27 April 2020), using the 197 plays dated 1590–1610 inclusive in Pervez Rizvi’s dramatic corpus. These are the corpus’s estimated composition dates, not publication dates. Counts use the supplied lemmas and distinct play identifiers; incomprehensibly is grouped with incomprehensible, and yelping with yelp. Both eligibility and word frequencies are restricted to this period. This is a vocabulary-distribution test, not an authorship probability. For the intertextual dating problem see Janet Clare, What You Will, Complete Works of John Marston.↩︎
Ken Feinstein, “Marston’s ‘What You Will’ and Shakespeare”, 27 April 2020. Janet Clare’s account for the Complete Works of John Marston records the alternative reading of Quadratus as Marston and Lampatho as Jonson. The earlier experimental affinity ranking is not restated as a fresh measurement here.↩︎
A. H. Bullen, introduction to The Works of John Marston, vol. I (London: John C. Nimmo, 1887), discussion of Pygmalion, public text. Bullen identifies the shared metre and Shakespearean inspiration, while questioning Marston’s later claim to have written the poem as a moral satire. For the Venus and Adonis echo, see Marston, “The Author in praise of his precedent Poem,” lines 29–30, printed p. 25: “So Labeo did complaine his loue was stone, / Obdurate, flinty, so relentlesse none.” Original page. Shakespeare, Venus and Adonis, lines 199–200. Marston’s quoted couplet modernizes spelling and punctuation; Shakespeare’s lineation is retained. Marston, The Metamorphosis of Pigmalions Image. And Certaine Satyres (London, 1598), pp. 42–43, TCP A07075; original p. 43. Shakespeare, 1 Henry IV, 1.3, Hotspur’s speech. Searches on 22 September 2026 used adjacent lemmas and a gap of zero to four tokens, checked against original-spelling variants. The relevant pre-1650 witnesses retrieved were TCP A11966 (1598), A07075 (1598) and A11954 (1623). This describes the searched texts, not every surviving book, and does not establish borrowing direction. The wider public corpus also returns later instances, including the 1700 adaptation of Henry IV and Centlivre’s The Cruel Gift (1717). EarlyPrint search documentation. Andrew Thrush, “NEVILLE, Sir Henry I (1564–1615)”, The History of Parliament: the House of Commons 1604–1629, ed. Andrew Thrush and John P. Ferris (2010), opening paragraph and n. 21, citing Newsletters from the Archpresbyterate of George Birkhead, ed. M. C. Questier, p. 192. The newsletter has been checked directly: [Benjamin Norton] to George West (Thomas More), 16 August 1612, letter 34, in Questier, Newsletters (Camden Fifth Series 12, 1998), pp. 188–193, at p. 192: “S.r Harry Nevill a greate Puritane shall execute the office.” Published text. The report envisages Viscount Rochester as chief secretary and Neville executing the office; it records a rumour, not an appointment. Manuscript reference supplied by the edition: AAW A XI, no. 136, pp. 369–72.↩︎
Marston, Pigmalions Image, p. 38, opening of Satire II. Charles Fitzgeoffrey, Affaniae (1601), III.41, Aonii … Nevilli; Latin and Dana F. Sutton’s translation. For the later descriptions of Neville’s corpulence, see note 5 above. The “amber tresses” on Marston’s pp. 45–46 belong to a separate figure, revealed as Lais in male clothing, and are not attributes assigned to the Boeotian speaker.↩︎